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History of music video presentation
The presentation on the history of music video's has a good amount of detail, covering micro elements of mise-en-scene, cinematography and editing. Pictures are also used to show the artist they are talking about, however, they could do with using a few more pictures to illustrate points they are making. They could have also compared both music videos with similarities and differences to show the path between the old and modern videos.

Poster for artist
Very professional looking, however, this needs more information needed on the actual album.

Goodwin analysis - student video
There are good points made on the video, with some good detail, but points 5 and 6 of the Goodwin analysis are not present.

Goodwin analysis - Take That 
There are good points made on the video, with some good detail, but points 5 and 6 of the Goodwin analysis are not present.

Individual blog post 
Two of the members have contributed to this blog with very detailed posts, one using a video, and the other using a picture. There isn't much too improve, but the other member needs to post an individual post.

Directors study
All three director's study lack detail, and the two videos by Spike Jonze needs to be compared to each other.

Abstract study
Not present.

Controversial music video
It is good that they have used facts on the video as it supports the points they have made, as well as good detail on the controversial elements.