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1. Poster for Lawson - Taking Over Me
The use of photoshop in this post has created a good professional looking poster for this band. Possibly use of different information outside of the band could be used as magazine pages usually include other information.

2. The History of Music Videos Presentation
There is a good variety of information including screenshots and an embedded video. A target for future presentations would be to have less text on each slide and more visual representations.

3. David Guetta - Titanium ft, Sia
There is good use of relevant information on this post and covers some good areas. However it needs clarity and more detail as at the moment it is slightly vague as to what the point of the post is.

4. Goodwin's Music Video Analysis - 'Bangarang' by Skrillex
This blog post has a vast amount of information and it is very clear to viewers what the point is. The use of images and videos also makes it more informative to the reader.

5. Looking at Celebrity Magazines
A good use of images are in the blog and some good information is present of each celebrity. The second task on the blog post could use more information to back up points that they have made and also images could have been used again.

6. Research - Andrew Goodwin's Theory of Music Videos
This blog has useful information that just reiterates previous blogs and is relevant to every task the group has posted.

7. Goodwin's theory on Ed Sheeran's Music Video 'Drunk'
Again there is a vast amount of all relevant useful information which goes into great detail and the inclusion of the video keeps it relevant and informative. However some points may become repetitive because of the amount of information used.

8. Wide Awake - Katy Perry
This blog post has a manageable amount of information to intake. However the post could do with subheadings to show clarity in each of the points made by the group.

9. Abstract Music Video - Lady Gaga 'Bad Romance'
Again this blog post has a manageable amount of information to intake. However the post could do with subheadings to show clarity in each of the points made by the group.

10. Auteur Analysis
The use of the videos in the post are relevant and informative to viewers, however the amount of information is to vague and brief. More points need to be made for a thorough analysis.

11. Music Videos that have caused controversy - Britney Spears 'Baby One More Time'
The information present is all relevant but more depth in the analysis could be added to back up the points you have made.